Please go through all my concrete suggestions and comments from June 30, 2023. They are step-by-step.

I gave them here and in the Discussion(s). I cross-referenceed them. No one else is doing that.

Once again, l confirm that I am qualified to provide them.

I won’t contribute to any more suggestions to the draft until and unless the HKPEOC gives positive feedbacks soon.

Time is of the essence.

EC members will look down on this draft. If they are at all credible, they will not rectify it.